โ You got me wet you idiot !โ I steamed at my older brother Josh. It was a warm summer day at our wee lakeย and with my parents away in France and my big brother in charge we decided to invite some friends and have a party.โ What are you going to do โbout it ? โ I held up my water pistol and my friends did the same, the smug look on my brotherโs face vanished ,โ Fire !โ . It was a great war until it ended. We were roasting marshmallows on the fireย then there was a flash of light then darkness, someone screamed โฆ.
That’s an AWESOME story Tessa. When are we going to do it? ๐
I really love the descriptive language you have used in this piece of writing Tessa, especially “I steamed at my older brother.” I also like how you have left the reader wanting more. Did you post this on the 100 word challenge site?